Saturday, October 8, 2011

Graphic Design feedback

  • Step back 2-3 px away from boundary
  • Try to work with a shadow under the notification boxes
  • Text should be blue or magenta and no other colour
  • The keys are nice but I am mixed up with two different semantic layers. Looking at the keys I search for the picture-puzzle. But in fact it is only a multiple choice. The keys don't work. Just stick with the text.
  • The thin line does not accord to the rest of the design. without would also be fine.
  • Think about the different information-layers and distinguish them mor obvious. I would in general distinguish more over colours, than over the kind of writing (capital letters/mixed). Shadows under the bubbles also help to distinguish layers
  • If the thin outlines and the sticthed lines bump together it won't work. Maybe the inactive 'stitches' consist more of a coloured field (30% of the blue p.ex) than of an outlined figure.
  • The Text of the message should perhaps be in a more rtf-Style, somewhat like Verdana or Georgia, and can be black.
  • This looks a bit strange. Also problematic in outzooming. Maybe you invent a plain, not stitched heart, which lays under the number? This is also more where the heart is.
  • Create guideline feature- maybe you type in one font and it saves the guideline in tant gertrud font
  • Keep a number for counter instead of visual stitches. Put this counter where the"back" button earlier was located- bottom left corner.
  • Keep the history page button on the left bottom along with the other icons. left signifies back.
  • Make the text under the icons permanent
  • Make the notification boxes with slanted corners. And make separate boxes underneath for okay, cancel, view, and other options which are clickable. always make the notifications clickable.
  • When moving from the question- to unlocking- to congratulations- the surprise element of having received the guideline could be that the little cross stitch does an animation- shakes and surprises or makes a happy face?
  • Make the shadow less- 50 percent.

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